so I played through the demo.
its pathetic even for a demo. 99% just clicking through extra wordy dialog with nothing of interest going on. The most action you see is a still image of the redhead looking away from the camera in the bathroom. The artwork of this still image needs work.
the scene where you "push" or "spank" is very empty. at least make the spank fulfilling, like make her but squish with a hand gesture or something.
dont release a demo if there is nothing of value there which will make someone want more. This made me want to not look at this game again for like 2 or 3 years.
make the filler dialogue less wordy. The wordier parts should be about sexy things, not boring logistics which are largely unimportant or will be forgotten about.
also - on the dialogue bubble. The section with the name needs to be a separate picture overlayed on top of the actual word bubble. The section with the name needs to be a drawn rectangle, not a static picture. The drawn rectangle needs to be resized based on the length of the name. One of the character's names was going decently outside of the name box and it looks bad.
I would hold off on releasing any more updates until you can get full frontal nudity of at least all 3 girls in someway. I would hold off on the update until you could get an animated stripping, blowjob, or sex scene. I would hold off on the next patch until you can have some dialogue which establishes a sexual relationship between the main character and one of the girls.
Dont release an update that has no progress and is just a bunch of filler wording. This kills all enthusiasm for the quality of this game.
I do want this game to exist, and I want it to do well. I really wanna fap to these girls. Maybe look to what Four Elements Trainer does right for inspiration.