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000000 No.51398
Joining just trough pure curiosity, but man 20 words just to see the pictures is not hard but slightly bothersome. Gonna do it anyway.
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d79bbe No.51408
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6b4e05 No.51415
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18ec42 No.51419
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7f15f6 No.51431
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7f15f6 No.51432
Second page! First thing i’ll mention is how well you seemed to focus on proper framing for the characters utilizing the background. Panel 1 obviously utilizes the foreground elements of the trees to focus your attention on Jun and Ray Ray, but then you also have the “negative space” created by the trees and sky in the background that really help Juniper be more readable visually (most notably in Panel 2 and 9).
You used your speech bubbles VERY effectively in panel 4 and 5, obviously the way they bridge the panels helps us follow and pace out Jun’s eye movements, but you also chose to cover Ray Ray’s eyes. This simultaneously highlights the fact that Jun is disconnected from the conversation, currently seeing him as a piece of meat, and allows the (generally heterosexual male) audience to not feel like they are having a ‘moment’ with Ray Ray through Jun’s eyes. Good stuff.
The sequence continues with “pink naked vision”, the fade into pink speech bubbles and the punchline of Jun snapping back to reality all works together. Your single panel “animation” attempt on panel 6, while not /perfect/ does it’s job IMO. It can be hard sometimes to pull this technique off without it looking like a multi headed abomination. The left Jun’s rightmost shirt collar and face act like a dividing line between the two, giving her top layer priority and I think it’s the MVP of the sequence. Of course the white movement lines, accentuated further by Jun’s hair lines and head angle, and her shifting eyeline help too.
If i’d give a suggestion for next time, i’d say to have the “first frame” of the single panel animation more in line with where the reader is already looking. While the rightmost Jun is aligned fairly well with the last speech bubble of the previous panel, and her face is centered symmetrically with naked Ray Ray, the leftmost Jun is a little bit too low, especially in regards to the speech bubble. I found my eyes going to the right Jun first, then the left Jun. Hopefully pic related helps get across what i’m trying to say. Last thing about the art itself, love the apparently braless Jun in Panel 9, cute perky titties :).
As for the substance of the page, the dialogue is snappy and on point, as you tend to do well with Juniper especially. Good chemistry between her and Ray Ray. Some fun little references to things like The Smurfs and Fraggle Rock. We’ve begun to establish that Juniper’s magic nymphomania is beginning to extend to her siscon younger brother. I’m totally down for Juniper X Ray Ray 110%, but I wonder if that’s the road you’ll take, especially with a Marcus willing to turn down Trixie Tang being there. I’m excited to see your take on Grim, he’s always a blast, and it seems like Juniper (and possibly Ray Ray) are going to start interacting with kids at the camp more during their investigation, which I think is a great move, integrate them more into everybody else’s stuff, and keep us at the core appeal of the story, the camp itself.
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201d7f No.51434
This is some good shit - I think that for the amount of classic gen whatever cartoon folks you're trying to cover it actually reads as pretty entertaining in between the porn of it all
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899435 No.51441
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23ee00 No.51442
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23ee00 No.51443
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23ee00 No.51444
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000000 No.51458
Ok, this is me. I'm writing a bunch of words to soo if I can join. I don't know what's going on. This seems to be what everyone else is doing. So now I'm doing it too. Still typing. And typing some more.
Finally, I'm going to finish up with these words.
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b8f3e1 No.51464
Ok, this is me. I'm writing a bunch of words to soo if I can join. I don't know what's going on. This seems to be what everyone else is doing. So now I'm doing it too. Still typing. And typing some more.
Finally, I'm going to finish up with these words.
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ec5cc1 No.51470
Cubs and Scouts of the world start packing for the great outdoors @ Camp Sherwood. With any luck we'll run into Robin('s) Hood and his merry band of Men in Tights.
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895aee No.51475
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66ba80 No.51500
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66ba80 No.51502
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66ba80 No.51503
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41bbbf No.51504
here goes. dont really care but trying it out. trying to see what everyone else is on about but will most likely be disappointed lol
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41bbbf No.51505
trying to see if this works but apparently not
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53b74a No.51521
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e78d8b No.51522
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bdba5b No.51544
>>51522
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c2ffb2 No.51559
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000000 No.51574
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000000 No.51575
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000000 No.51576
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4e19f6 No.51586
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ba253b No.51598
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f8658f No.51600
helllooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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000000 No.51612
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000000 No.51613
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07ea89 No.51621
Hey guys, did you know that in terms of male human and female Pokémon breeding, Vaporeon is the most compatible Pokémon for humans? Not only are they in the field egg group, which is mostly comprised of mammals, Vaporeon are an average of 3"03' tall and 63.9 pounds. this means they're large enough to be able to handle human dicks, and with their impressive Base stats for HP and access to Acid Armor, you can be rough with one. Due to their mostly water based biology, there's no doubt in my mind that an aroused Vaporeon would be incredibly wet, so wet that you could easily have sex with one for hours without getting sore. They can also learn the moves Attract, Baby-Doll eyes, Captivate, Charm and Tail Whip along with not having fur to hide nipples, so it'd be incredibly easy for one to get you in the mood. With their abilities Water Absorb and Hydration, they can easily recover from fatigue with enough water. No other Pokémon comes close with this level of compatibility. Also, fun fact, if you pull out enough, you can make your Vaporeon turn white. Vaporeon is literally built for human dick. Ungodly defense stat + high HP pool + Acid Armor means it can take cock all day, all shapes and sizes and still come for more.
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b8eb74 No.51707
The curious cat leaped gracefully onto the fence, observing the bustling activity of the neighborhood below. Birds chirped melodiously, and leaves rustled in the gentle breeze. Suddenly, a squirrel darted across the yard, catching the cat's attention. With a quick pounce, the cat chased after its elusive prey, disappearing into the bushes.
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b32fdc No.51718
>>44578
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d10c11 No.51796
ilove how this thnig is like extra good
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d10c11 No.51797
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398b8d No.51812
So I saw something about. 20 words or characters to join or some shit so here I am. Not sure if this got me 20 of whatever or not but big not I'll just keep on surfing. twenty tweynty twenty wordsa yaya
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ee0af5 No.51826
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132419 No.51853
>>43607
So I saw something about. 20 words or characters to join or some shit so here I am. Not sure if this got me 20 of whatever or not but big not I'll just keep on surfing. twenty tweynty twenty wordsa yaya
So I saw something about. 20 words or characters to join or some shit so here I am. Not sure if this got me 20 of whatever or not but big not I'll just keep on surfing. twenty tweynty twenty wordsa yaya
So I saw something about. 20 words or characters to join or some shit so here I am. Not sure if this got me 20 of whatever or not but big not I'll just keep on surfing. twenty tweynty twenty wordsa yaya
So I saw something about. 20 words or characters to join or some shit so here I am. Not sure if this got me 20 of whatever or not but big not I'll just keep on surfing. twenty tweynty twenty wordsa yaya
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f90d1a No.51858
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